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#54 "Around the Fire"

26th Jul 2013, 5:20 PM
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#54 "Around the Fire"
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dougwarner59 26th Jul 2013, 5:41 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
great writing, great art, nuff said.
JRChace 26th Jul 2013, 5:53 PM edit delete reply
JRChace
I like this scene! Very well done!
Songgu Kwon 26th Jul 2013, 6:35 PM edit delete reply
Songgu Kwon
Thanks, guys! This one actually has 2 continuity errors. Can you spot them?
quetzlsacatanango 26th Jul 2013, 8:43 PM edit delete reply
quetzlsacatanango
That pretty elf guy died 12 page ago?
Songgu Kwon 26th Jul 2013, 10:51 PM edit delete reply
Songgu Kwon
If you mean the guy that gets an arrow through the neck in #47, nope.
Centcomm 26th Jul 2013, 9:10 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
whoa .. this.. is awesome as always :D and no i am a sad kitty I cant figure out the errors..
Songgu Kwon 26th Jul 2013, 10:53 PM edit delete reply
Songgu Kwon
The errors are pretty minor but they're the sort of things one might notice in a film sequence. I'll check back later.
dougwarner59 27th Jul 2013, 12:01 AM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
the only time I see errors is when I read the comic several times and really love what the person is doing; You're comic is somewhat bi-weekly and by the time I read the next page, the previous page is kind of fuzzy anyways. and being an artist (Not, a true fan) I will not go back and read it over again; so, you can make a massive amount of errors and I will not notice them. All I see is how the current page looks and reads.
Mayyday 27th Jul 2013, 12:29 AM edit delete reply
Mayyday
Is it that Erathdor inexplicably moves from Durgo's left to across the fire between shots?
dpat57 27th Jul 2013, 2:36 AM edit delete reply
dpat57
Lovely characterization, I haz envy yet I enjoy your work lots.

Durgo already got asked, in panel 1, but they're asking him again in the last panel? No wait, that was about the battle, now they're asking him about his fortune, scratch that.
Songgu Kwon 27th Jul 2013, 3:19 AM edit delete reply
Songgu Kwon
Okay, Mayyday pretty much got the big one.

If you look at the last panel of the previous page, you'll note that Erathdor is seated with his sis and Expositus to his left and mustache guy to his right.

The 1st panel of the current page establishes that his position has not changed. Yet in panel 6, he's seated with mustache guy & Durgo to his left and sis & Expositus to his right. Oops!

The 2nd continuity error is that Expositus is wearing gloves in the previous page and in panel 6 yet appears to have taken them off in panel 3. Oops. I'll probably correct that sometime. Thanks for playing!
Draginbeard 27th Jul 2013, 2:13 PM edit delete reply
Draginbeard
Enjoying the work you've done here, slight errors aren't even noticed.
Guest 28th Jul 2013, 5:13 AM edit delete reply
wel...since the page isn't coloured and you only see part of his hand, the gloves may well still be there in panel 6...the lines at the edge of the thumb suggest a glove more than bare skin if the page ever gets coloured, just colour the hands the same in poth panels and problem solved aka "clean it up in post production' ;)
Guest 28th Jul 2013, 5:17 AM edit delete reply
much like the typos in the previous post need a little 'post production' touchup..and I meant panel 3, not 6...to me, it looks like he's still wearing gloves there and you can always blame the 'seated sequence error' on the other two sitting back far enough as seen in panel 6 that they were cropped out of the shot in the first panel due to the 'camera' angle
Songgu Kwon 28th Jul 2013, 8:11 PM edit delete reply
Songgu Kwon
True, but then the background wouldn't quite match up. I agree that the hand would be a quick fix and considering the effect of the bright light source in that panel, it's probably fine the way it is. Just goes to show that continuity isn't super important as long as the compositions serve to tell the story.
Ensis 2nd Aug 2013, 1:51 PM edit delete reply
Ensis
Durgo... The sad man.